Annotated Chapter 8 – Guilded Age

Annotated 8-25

Sat, 16 Feb 2019 04:50:22 +0000

This page was silent in Phil’s original script. At the last minute, I added some dialogue that built off the last spoken line from page 23. I think that was pretty clearly the right call. One consequence of the age […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 8-24

Fri, 15 Feb 2019 04:17:26 +0000

Happy… Valentine’s Day? Man, Phil and John are just killing it here. This is all about the visual storytelling, and any play-by-play I could give would be superfluous. After Byron fought past the berserker spell once in Chapter 7, it’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 8-23

Thu, 14 Feb 2019 04:21:39 +0000

Here, the story had a problem. Well, the problem had existed all along, but this brought it to the forefront: we had a lot of heavy hitters fighting each other and not a lot of reference for how powerful some […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 8-22

Wed, 13 Feb 2019 04:53:56 +0000

I did have to give John one design note: to bulk up Frigg’s armor a bit. It lost some dimensions between her first appearance in the chapter and the end of her set-to with Harky. Here, it’s pretty close to […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 8-21

Tue, 12 Feb 2019 04:35:58 +0000

Bandit’s given a burst of dialogue here and doesn’t waste any of it: speaking for the readers a bit and dangling a small hope of escape while also setting up the story’s actual climax. My records are still patchy from […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...