Comments on: Annotated 25-5

By: Abnaxis

Abnaxis — Sun, 14 Jun 2020 21:25:17 +0000

I think a *gasp* after the first line would have helped more. It has me really confused too until you explained it.

The only thing I could figure is that the serious-faced people were offended, non-human sympathizers or something.

By: Oldguy

Oldguy — Fri, 12 Jun 2020 04:54:08 +0000

Gotcha. Thanks for explaining, little bits of hanging plot like that frazzle my brain sometimes.

By: Keiranhalcyon31

Keiranhalcyon31 — Thu, 11 Jun 2020 17:34:24 +0000

Oooo, I just noticed that contrary to my original reading, he didn't say "your people."

By: T

Thu, 11 Jun 2020 10:57:01 +0000

Already wrote the answer to this one in tomorrow’s comment!

By: Keiranhalcyon31

Keiranhalcyon31 — Thu, 11 Jun 2020 10:06:14 +0000

What’s Caneghem’s story, here? Why would he be hanging with Annunziata? Is he making sure the scene will be set perfectly later in the chapter?

More broadly – as revealed later, Caneghem has (or seems to have) a much higher station than mere “envoy to Gastonia”, so why didn’t he delegate this whole unpleasantness to someone else? Is it a “The only person I trust to engage with them is me” thing?