Comments on: Chapter 25 – Page 22

By: Borg

Borg — Tue, 14 Mar 2017 21:25:22 +0000

There’s no way that ground takes a palm print well enough to determine anything more specific than “there was a human here.”

And I’ve got to back up Jude that leaving DNA in a pool of stomach acid, mixed with plant and animal DNA, exposed to the air, and outside is not a good way to preserve it for analysis.

By: Observer

Observer — Thu, 12 Mar 2015 20:12:56 +0000

I feel like we need some flash back montage with internal monologue to explain how the Carol of the reporters case history transformed morally into a being capable of going along with this? (she probably thought she was saving those people up till recently??)

Yeah I know he’s threatening to drag her down with him but if she immediately goes to the police saying he killed some guy and giving evidence I’m sure she can have her multiple kidnapping sentences reduced. (and hopefully kept at just kidnapping when unplugging them kills them too) I feel this is a cut your losses moment that someone as intelligent as Carol would recognize during the hour or so it probably took to get dressed, get back to the company, load the body and get all the way out here.

By: SotiCoto

SotiCoto — Wed, 19 Feb 2014 12:59:17 +0000

Well… that all escalated quickly.

By: SotiCoto

SotiCoto — Wed, 19 Feb 2014 12:58:36 +0000

I would imagine, without looking it up, that emptying one’s stomach-contents like that would also leave behind a fair bit of stomach lining. DNA. Right there.
Not to mention whatever other cells were gathered on the way up.
Not to mention she is supporting her the heel of her right hand. That’ll probably leave its own trace.

Honestly, she is doing a terrible job of this… but then she clearly lacks experience.

By: Saskyou

Saskyou — Fri, 13 Sep 2013 17:43:56 +0000

It’s first twice! Wow