Iver – Guilded Age

Annotated 46-20

Tue, 12 Jul 2022 03:20:22 +0000

Joys this page has to offer the reader: Magda gleefully constructing a mobile cage for Iver in the background, and his little crybaby face when he realizes what she’s doing (stellar minimalist expressions from John here). Harky showing moderation and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 46-19

Mon, 11 Jul 2022 03:07:40 +0000

As I’ve mentioned before, Flo and I sometimes disagreed about when to use anticlimax in an action set piece. In this case, however, we were of one mind. For one thing, two arena action set pieces in a row would’ve […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 46-18

Sat, 09 Jul 2022 10:25:02 +0000

Flo and I had occasionally discussed what Iver thought about the reports that Gravedust was alive, which must have reached his ears eventually. Auraugu discovered at least one of the five was alive and kicking as early as Chapter 13. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 46-17

Fri, 08 Jul 2022 10:58:47 +0000

I mentioned earlier that Savasi culture was changing and uncertain after its years under Iver the war-loving warlord. As it is growing recognized that the Savasi have taken many casualties and must breed aggressively to survive, Iver can paint abstinence […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 46-16

Fri, 08 Jul 2022 03:39:55 +0000

Harky and Penk’s display of respect for each other continues here. It’s very deliberate that Harky is the one to praise “the young and their new ideas” and Penk speaks of “the elders and their hard-won wisdom,” not the other […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...