Morbundi – Guilded Age

Annotated 1-4

Fri, 29 Jun 2018 03:45:42 +0000

Nice finish. Simple gag, quick resolution, and Morbundi’s last words are natural for him to say, amusing, and lead directly into the next scenes, wherein we find out who these people even are. Given his powers and his scenery-chewing, Morbundi […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 1-3

Thu, 28 Jun 2018 03:45:04 +0000

I mean, I guess “playing with fire” is a pun? If you read it in its purely figurative sense? But Frigg, you literally JUST MADE A PUN ON THE PREVIOUS PAGE. “He’s a ‘mouth.’ ‘Going down.'” We were all there. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 1-2

Wed, 27 Jun 2018 03:45:29 +0000

“I can always do science to it.” Fun fact: we donated some of our surplus printed stock to a charity looking for uplifting reading material in general, with a special emphasis on science education for girls and women. Sure, an […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 1-1

Tue, 26 Jun 2018 03:45:05 +0000

First four-page scene! This one is largely Phil with my edits, so I feel a little bad critiquing it, but there are a lot of pros and cons on display. The good: Guilded Age wastes absolutely no time telling the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Chapter 1, Page 4

Guilded Age — Mon, 14 Sep 2009 04:00:00 +0000