Oak’f – Guilded Age

Annotated 19-15

Sun, 29 Dec 2019 04:18:59 +0000

Syr’Nj is still thousand-yard-staring in panel 1, but perks up briefly in 2 when her mother expresses her confidence in her. The full implications of this moment will hit her a bit later. Worth asking: how does Faereksch’Nj know about […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 19-14

Fri, 27 Dec 2019 15:50:04 +0000

I think I took point on dialoguing some of this page; notes are spotty, but Syr’Nj’s attempt to articulate the real concern of the moment, and Byron immediately understanding what she means despite her stammering, feels like something I’d do. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 18-25

Mon, 18 Nov 2019 04:22:45 +0000

Phil seriously reworked the ending from my original, adding a page to it (making this our largest chapter so far at 27 pages). He also left this note in the comments on the script: “I found the brevity of this […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 17-11

Thu, 10 Oct 2019 03:05:55 +0000

Oak’f here had a storyline we never picked up; named for Georgia O’Keeffe (and originally named “Jor’ja”), she was outlined as “an elder who always wanted to be a painter in a society which views art as a doomed attempt […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Chapter 19 – Page 15

Guilded Age — Wed, 14 Nov 2012 05:01:00 +0000