Rendar – Guilded Age

Annotated 50-28

Wed, 01 Feb 2023 04:03:16 +0000

I meant this as a six-member adventuring party (breaking with our “party of five” tradition as the Champions did), and it pretty much is, but either Flo or John decided that we needed a little more crew to actually pilot this vessel […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 49-7

Sun, 13 Nov 2022 04:17:45 +0000

(No FB today.) Usually, just admitting the flaws in your own writing and trying to spin them as part of a master plan doesn’t really work. (Much as I liked She-Hulk, the finale’s “No no, see, we were SATIRIZING Marvel’s bad habits” […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 49-6

Sat, 12 Nov 2022 04:16:57 +0000

FB: Xan has squiggle vision. I’ll get into the plot side of this sequence more tomorrow. You can see me tinkering with transitions a bit here, from Sundar’s “safely” back to Shanna’s “how are we defining ‘safely?'”, which could comment amusingly […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 49-4

Thu, 10 Nov 2022 04:14:46 +0000

FB: “So, basically, we’ve established that two separate guys with mustaches have threatened or tried to kill you in your last two appearances. He doesn’t seem like much of a fighter, but if you see Mister Bedard in all this, maybe […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 48-45

Thu, 27 Oct 2022 03:38:22 +0000

FB: Actually, getting Frigg started right now seems like a pretty good idea, strategically. If we’d had the purplezerkers coming out of the ground just everywhere in this outro, then any defense our heroes could mount would be rendered futile too quickly. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...