Annotated Chapter 13 – Guilded Age

Annotated 13-24

Wed, 03 Jul 2019 03:31:38 +0000

I may have said this before and may again, but it was pretty clear which side of the Syr’Nj/Bandit conflict Phil and I tended to favor. Phil’s draft had Syr’Nj backing down immediately and completely after “Y’can’t yell at me […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 13-23

Tue, 02 Jul 2019 03:23:27 +0000

I think this solution managed to be a fairly elegant, unexpected combo move, and transitions nicely to Bandit explaining it on the next page. Still, I had to cut a panel Phil added or there never would’ve been enough space […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 13-22

Mon, 01 Jul 2019 03:04:32 +0000

I had a “dagger as lightning rod” bit here that was probably better off cut. Stokla’s demise feels a little Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade to me now. She can kill these jerks who are only surviving to piss […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 13-21

Sun, 30 Jun 2019 03:36:20 +0000

Let’s just call the repeated use of o_O-face a transitional device. Speaking of devices, I had to lobby hard for the use of “pointer panels” on this page. They’re only really there because John broke the tie between me and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 13-20

Sat, 29 Jun 2019 03:13:00 +0000

Okay, maybe by the last panel here, Gravedust and Frigg are starting to figure out Syr’Nj’s actual emotional state. This was a great set of facial expressions all around. This may have been a landmark in Frigg and Syr’Nj’s relationship, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...