Annotated Chapter 14 – Guilded Age

Annotated 14-24

Sun, 28 Jul 2019 03:16:19 +0000

The last panel wasn’t direct foreshadowing, but it could have been, and I like the note of uncertainty. Honestly, the closing speech is probably a natural 20 for diplomacy by Keeper Kepfer’s standards. If nothing else, his words are going […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 14-23

Sat, 27 Jul 2019 03:48:05 +0000

And here we ride this running gag as far as it can possibly, possibly go. Phil came up with Scipio’s reaction (which plays on the double meaning of “tank” to suggest that he might have actually seen Frigg’s power, but […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 14-22

Fri, 26 Jul 2019 03:11:51 +0000

Yeah, I’m with you, Frigg! I’m not gonna deal with immensely powerful machinery trying to crush me to death either! Just not having it today. Maybe Sunday, if I’m feeling patient. RIP Hammertank the First. I made a deliberate decision […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 14-21

Thu, 25 Jul 2019 03:48:09 +0000

Hey, when you need a minor casualty to keep your story moving, not one of your main characters, should it be someone who’s been introduced by name earlier in the story or just some rando with a sword? Asking for […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...

Annotated 14-20

Wed, 24 Jul 2019 03:04:38 +0000

Gotta say, being able to pull together and defend their home in the moment like this is a pretty good argument for Gnometown’s centralized superclan culture, even if it is xenophobic and a bit willfully blind. Most people in a […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry...