Wait, we’re done a page early? Really? Does that mean Phil was taking some of my sentiments about keeping things within 24 pages to heart? Ha ha no, that’s definitely not it, see previous and next chapter. Fr’Nj and Scipio’s exchange here, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Soldier in panel 2: “BANTER ON YOUR OWN TIME, PLEASE” Phil and I had some back-and-forth on whether Bandit’s last line should be “…Auraugu?” Phil won, but I dunno. I feel like if you’ve fought somebody twice, they nearly killed […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil improved this one significantly in terms of both dialect and dynamics, but the thrust of it remains the same: Goblaurence is about to learn the downside of being trusted to be the genius he is. And you can see […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When it came to big battles, my instinct was still to look for the really splashy moments, whereas Phil wrote with more of an eye toward “strategy porn.” But every so often you get a moment that’s both. We’d been […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
SPLASH PAGE. Viewed from above, the battle gets more intense, with multiple mini-battles playing out along the front. The Land Sharks start to pour into that front as the trolls get a little too much resistance to handle it all […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
