Phil and Erica made my original version of this scene a lot funnier by giving Ardaic the sort of dialogue Frigg would imagine for him and going all in on the expressions, though there wasn’t room to show that Frigg […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil called this “the sidequest chapter.” I felt this plot was a good excuse to take our characters as far from their comfort zones as we could get them. The Star Trek: TNG episode “Disaster” has always struck me as […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
TBH, I think we overestimated the comedic potential of the “flooding prison incident.” It seemed like a nice gag: our heroes found themselves in an outrageous situation and haha, you’ll never find out exactly why they were there. But it […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Yeah, yeah, Bandit. You sure are acting relaxed for somebody whose last appearance in this very building was as a prisoner. But I guess the operative word is “acting”: Bandit spends a lot of time affecting the certainty that everyone […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil grudgingly let me have the “ka-this, ka-that, ka-these” gag, but had fewer reservations when we built on it later. Byron’s eyeballs were supposed to be replaced with ralds in his “KA-CHING” panel, and it looks like they TECHNICALLY are, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
