I’ll cop to the fact that Scarlett’s shift from Gigundus-speak back to soliloquy here is a bit “convenient” in terms of explaining everything for the reader. I think it was important, however, to establish that there was once a real […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Although it’s lightly implied, Byron’s “everything comes together” line really should accompany an actual image of Gigundus’ remaining parts falling to pieces. Still, I like how his lines here feel like callbacks to his punning in his big Chapter 1 […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Either this page or the next was an addition by Phil… I’m gonna say this page? This pushed our page count from 24 to 25 for the first time. This may not seem like a big deal, and I didn’t […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Well, it wasn’t going to be THAT easy. Hey, it’s Rachel’s first appearance! Of sorts. As Gravedust suggested in his opening narration, the most dangerous thing about Scarlett is that she believes her own bullshit, or at least most of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here’s another example of Erica’s rebreaking of the flow of action. The captions here are unaltered from the script, but here are the panel descriptions. 1. The nuns are getting to their feet and looking at the shattered window. Their […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
