We divvied this chapter up into eight sections of three pages, not our usual six sections of four pages, to widen the focus a bit (except for the Bandit-Syr’Nj section, which we agreed needed four pages even though that nudged […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Had it been up to me, the Heads of Houses would not have grown very far beyond the pampered aristocrats we saw in Chapter 3: I felt like too much of them might slow the story down. Phil saw it […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So this scene went through a couple of big revisions. At first, Ardaic was communicating ONLY with Priestlord Gigundus. This reflected my belief that the Bloodshot Eyeball was a more powerful force in Gastonia than it eventually became: that Gastonia […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
There’s no getting around it: this version of His Grace Iwatani really does not feel like the one we will start seeing in his next speaking appearance, which will be… (checks notes)… er, Chapter 15. We cover as best we […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Since it’s really long and explains our early ideas as well as I could now, I’m just going to dive right into the description of this group that I gave Erica back in late 2009-early 2010. Phil was better than […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
