Now, if Phil and I hadn’t been in a tug-of-war over the stakes, this moment would’ve stood out more, because it was the one high-stakes moment that I intended right from the first draft. It’s all fun and games until […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Getting this page to something like believability was a logistical nightmare. First Phil and I haggled over what kind of terrain would allow Bert to stand in our heroes’ way, release some gravity-powered automatons, and then, hobbled as he is, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Okay, I can start saying nice things about Phil again here: he encouraged this development and was a good audience for the results. Sometimes when you’re feeling down about yourself, you get tired of hearing from the people who would […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Tamara underwent a serious reworking from my original concept, which was a lot closer to the iconography of a traditional dominatrix, complete with whip and obvious leather. On the one hand, I’m glad we made the change, because that original […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I’m trying not to dwell on this, but here again, a character seems to be stomping on my outlined intent for the chapter. We’ve seen Braggadocio and Byron resolve other differences in a cheery punch-’em-up with little risk of serious […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
