So I don’t know if it was clear or if I ever said it before, but “The Battle of the Burning Heels” is so called because that was the battle where the dwarves were forced to retreat into the desert, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here’s a note I made to Phil in the revision process that I think stands up on its own: This strikes me as Byron’s REAL problem with trying to keep close to his adventuring roots. He has people relying on […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I like that the dialogue brings in links to prior scenes, with the mention of Bert followed by Byron reapplying the argument he made to E-Merl two pages earlier. (By the bye, the whole “You’re drinking FOR me” concept comes […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil loved “The Swiggin’ Fist.” This is an interesting plot we sorta cut off here, and I guess it counts as unplanned foreshadowing. Despite her now-enviable position, Bandit’s still low-key fending off her klepto impulses, and she wonders if the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“And after the runoff, we have… another tie vote, because Frigg changed her vote at the last second just to spite Rachel. TURNS OUT DEMOCRACY IS USELESS, OH WELL, BYRON’S YOUR LEADER, HAVE A NICE MISSION” Look at that body […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
