Around this time, Phil wrote about half of a children’s-book-style story we would’ve presented as a bonus at some point. I’m not sure why we didn’t go back and finish it once the need for bonus stories became greater: maybe […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I mean, if you want to get TECHNICAL, Gravedust was the one first with the answer there and Syr’Nj interrupted his explanation halfway through. Still, I’m amused by the friendly vibe between Best and Syr here. Depending on how you […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Unusually, Best’s lyrics here are Phil’s, and are they ever revealing. It’s a great little irony that Syr’Nj, who ordinarily might’ve sensed the cry for understanding in them, is too busy geeking out about her echolocation experiment (and okay, being […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The original plan for this scene had Syr’Nj contributing a lot less. Best’s arrogance and overall… Best-ness, losing contact with the others, the overall strain of leadership, and her suicidal quasi-boyfriend would have made her snappish, leading Best to curb […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I like the feel of this cliffhanger: it uses the slightly off-balance feeling of the rest of the chapter to its advantage. (“We’re not SUPPOSED to wait till halfway through to start an adventure! We’re not supposed to have started […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
