Earlier drafts of this scene had HR a lot talkier. He would have discussed his plans for Ferris’ body, making it clear he has intentions here beyond just killing a witness. And he would have spoken briefly about what he […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
For this chapter, we were trying something I might describe as a “forked outline,” where almost every page contained suggestions of other possibilities. I have forgotten most of these suggestions by now, and this page is so laden with seeming […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think if you cornered me and Phil and asked us to delineate what exactly is going on with HR here, we’d probably give you two different answers. Maybe the last of his humanity disappeared just before he engaged with […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
It takes a lot of gravitas to look intimidating in boxer shorts. Kind of amusing how the runes of light HR is manipulating look like one of Tony Stark’s displays, translated for Thor’s use. Are you sure they’re not praying to you, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Okay, this scene transition really makes it look like the Cultists are going to come through to our world, doesn’t it? Especially given the use of purple in the previous scene. I guess we could’ve done that. Would’ve meant throwing out our […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
