I like how hard Carol goes here; the basics of her dialogue were Phil, but I shuffled and altered it a bit for an emotional crescendo. I do some of my best work with characters who openly doubt an idea […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I gotta admit, I wish I’d had this kind of professor-pupil relationship with any of my bosses. They mostly just wanted me to do the work, make the reports, and go away. That’s not the only reason Carol’s so loyal, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Employee feedback, lightly salted. We were still conscious of the fact that watching people watch things is a lot harder to make interesting than watching people do things, so we brought as much comedy as we could to this intro. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“I thought you didn’t like my spending so much time down here,” says HR. Carol, if you think he’s been down here a lot in the scenes we’ve done so far, you ain’t seen nothing yet. I mean yeah, that’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Writing deliberate nonsense can be harder than it sounds! I had to try at least three times before I got something that my subconscious wasn’t trying to make sound like something else. John changed the level of damage here from […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
