We almost put Naror’Nj’s death in the last panel of the previous page. I talked Phil out of it on the basis that “You are some lesser creature” was still a legitimate cliffhanger and this way we get more of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I’m proud of Phil for laying E-Merl’s half-elf ancestry into the early notes and proud of me for using it to actually propel the plot. We needed something to bring Syr’Nj’s anger at her father to a fresh boil, for […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The original version of the Auraugu-Gravedust fight was more cut up, and we didn’t get to see him seethe like this; good improvement. So much for any hope that Naror’Nj coming clean to Syr’Nj about the Bough would heal the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I feel like this page sort of annotates itself while John Waltrip does a four-minute guitar solo. So here’s a script page from the trial sequence that, if we had followed our original plan, would’ve begun about now. It’s pretty […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I’m still thinking about Syr’Nj’s lumberjack-disgust from yesterday’s page. And you know, we never clarified whether… I mean, Byron is a general-purpose freelancer, he specializes in violence but it’s not like he doesn’t know how to cut wood… I’m just […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
