John’s ability as a storyteller always gets a bit undersold. He doesn’t talk himself up much, and story’s supposed to be the writers’ area. But a piece like this really shows how much story he can fit into a single […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The relationship vibe between Rana and Yalaria was a bit challenging, and we had to edit out some dialogue that just didn’t fit that well with their established voices. As I said earlier, Yalaria comes off as not too bright […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“What did you DO to him?” I realize Yalaria comes off a little dim, but pistols of any kind are a very rare commodity on Arkerra, so it wouldn’t be too OOC for even a creature of above-average intelligence to […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Now it can be told: the name I wanted to reveal early for this item was “The Phoenix Egg of Restoration.” This would almost certainly give its power and purpose away to a large percentage of the readers, and Phil […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I appreciate that Isidro’s dialogue gets very spare and minimal when he’s focused on fleeing in this page and the last. There’s a time to think and there’s a time to run. Maybe it’s a bit redundant for Rana and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
