Had it been up to me, the Heads of Houses would not have grown very far beyond the pampered aristocrats we saw in Chapter 3: I felt like too much of them might slow the story down. Phil saw it […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Well, I thought Phil had taken over the chapter titles at this point, but this feels like one of mine. I wish it were Phil’s, because it’s not that great. It’s mostly inspired by the number of fresh interactions we […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
A deleted scene from the next chapter would have clarified that Syr’Nj neither trusted Bandit’s account nor felt that Bandit trusted hers. I don’t remember which of us wrote it, but I do think it’s better for the story that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Wellp, glad that resurrection question is all settled then. On to the next thing! This is one of Guilded Age‘s most ambiguous scenes, and I’m not sure even Phil and I saw it in the same way. Is Bandit shooting […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Original pencils had Bandit poking at something like an aletap, but the instability of the tankard was better symbolism. My original notion for this page would have picked up the “writer’s prologue” trick that we’d used in Chapters 7, 8, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
