Annotated 31-16
I can tell, without looking it up in the script, that this is about where Flo started driving the bus for the rest of the chapter. The early stuff is just full of goings-on, the Joel-Shanna scene is a mix, but this moment is stretched and savored in a way that Flo just made a lot more of a priority. And I could say the same about the moment in the last page of this scene and the one running all through the next scene.
Mind, I still contributed a bit to the rest of these pages. Here, I gave the sky elves some “understanding and patient” commentary, explaining why GD wouldn’t get in trouble for breaking the statue but still twisting the knife in his gut. A reminder that even among the Gastonian alliance, the racism doesn’t always flow in just one direction.
You have to watch out you don’t get too depressed in a floating city. I mean, it’s not like it lacks convenient places to jump.
Is he… the Indian from the commercial with the trash?
You have to watch out you don’t get too depressed in a floating city. I mean, it’s not like it lacks convenient places to jump.
Fair point, but I’m not sure someone with Gravedust’s insight into death and what lies beyond would commit suicide. Now, make himself a few elf ghosts arrows? That’s a horse of another color…
If Gravedust were to flip out and start killing people over how he’s feeling now, I’m pretty sure the first name on his list would be the decidedly unelven Ardaic.
Now I feel like it’s a missed opportunity that the floating city doesn’t want shown with floating safety net underneath it…