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I felt like the last double-sized page was a little mis-paced, but I have no such issues with this one…or the next one, coming up next. They strike me as good examples of “as long as it needs to be” […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I felt like the last double-sized page was a little mis-paced, but I have no such issues with this one…or the next one, coming up next. They strike me as good examples of “as long as it needs to be” […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
All Flo asked for was that the bodies should form “in the most grotesque manner possible.” It’s a great example of John’s kind of logical creativity that the bodies materialize out of chopped wood, as if Byron’s told himself that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This page is Flo’s in every respect. Most people who’ve lived long enough have some experience with depression, but the way Byron lashes out here and the reasons behind it are something Flo knew very well. Ultimately, this is Byron’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sometimes the best comedic moments in a series echo the tragic ones, and vice versa. This interaction is scaled way down to the point where there are no real stakes, but the way it resonates with more serious moments in […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Pacing glitch…OR READER BONUS? Not sure why we elected to make this one specifically a double-sized entry, especially since the first half of the page ends on such a natural point for a cliffhanger. I think we could’ve joined the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…