I don’t think this was quite conscious, but after the brutal scenes for Byron in the last chapter, I was a bit eager to rebalance his narrative with some broad comedy. Sorry for overusing the Bruce Banner line, though; we’d […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Before we get into the meat of this chapter, let’s check in on the few folks who won’t be a part of it. Phil originally suggested that Gravedust and Rachel should also remain behind to tend to Byron spiritually, but […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So here we get to actually see the tower that Frigg and the naughty science bros negotiated over in Chapter 7. It will play host to a centerpiece in this chapter’s story, but I wish we’d figured out a way […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I may have said this before and may again, but it was pretty clear which side of the Syr’Nj/Bandit conflict Phil and I tended to favor. Phil’s draft had Syr’Nj backing down immediately and completely after “Y’can’t yell at me […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think this solution managed to be a fairly elegant, unexpected combo move, and transitions nicely to Bandit explaining it on the next page. Still, I had to cut a panel Phil added or there never would’ve been enough space […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
