I touched on this in an earlier annotation or two, but one of my big preoccupations in comics scriptwriting is fight dialogue. It used to be (and frankly, sometimes still is) a struggle for me to get the right words […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I thought Scipio’s fear of taking on too much authority would be a plot point, and it never quite materialized as one. I expect he did eventually take Fr’Nj up on her offer, but she’s correct in panel 5: that’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Of course, while these two are damn compatible lovers, there’s more going on here than just a good time in the sack. We’re also playing the getting-to-know-you game that decides the difference between passionate flings and ongoing life partners. Scipio […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So the question becomes, if we didn’t do sex very often, why did we feel the pull to do it here? Partly to try something new for the series, but more, I think, to firmly distinguish this relationship from Byr’Nj, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This scene is remarkable for how unlike the rest of the series it is. We didn’t do steamy content in Guilded Age very much, objectively speaking or compared to some of my other projects. Frigg (with Best, E-Merl, and others) […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
