Phil grudgingly let me have the “ka-this, ka-that, ka-these” gag, but had fewer reservations when we built on it later. Byron’s eyeballs were supposed to be replaced with ralds in his “KA-CHING” panel, and it looks like they TECHNICALLY are, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So this scene went through a couple of big revisions. At first, Ardaic was communicating ONLY with Priestlord Gigundus. This reflected my belief that the Bloodshot Eyeball was a more powerful force in Gastonia than it eventually became: that Gastonia […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here we have a brief test for Gravedust and Syr’Nj’s relationship. Given his people’s background fighting against Gastonia– and Syr’Nj’s people’s too, for that matter– any history she has with their military is hard for him to swallow. And there’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Byron doesn’t swear. He’s not religious about it or anything, he just doesn’t see the point, and it would clash with the levelheaded image he prefers to present. Phil and I went back and forth before settling on “whale.” His […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This feels in character for Syr’Nj-as-we-know-her after her first real adventure, once all the life-threatening stuff is over and before the pressure of making her dreams reality begins to weigh on her. But it also feels like the last remnant […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
