Iwatani, on the other hand, has no problem using the word “commoner,” and that was Phil’s point: Syr’s better than that, he isn’t. I think this is my favorite Iwatani Sr. page, mostly because of what it doesn’t do. One […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The first twelve pages here were mine, the last twelve were Phil’s, though I was certainly going to lean a lot on his notes about the Heads of Houses in the few pages after this. Syr’Nj is still short-tempered for […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Another Shanna parallel, this one more likely to have been subconsciously or consciously intentional, though we decided on Kur’Ik as a character before we thought about bringing Shanna in. Kur’Ik is not entirely unlike Shanna in build and hairstyle, and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Alt text aside, I don’t think Kur’Ik means to be throwing shade in the last frame. She lists the loss of Naror’Nj as among the tragedies that have beset her people. She’s just observing, not incorrectly, that Naror’Nj embodied old […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil seriously reworked the ending from my original, adding a page to it (making this our largest chapter so far at 27 pages). He also left this note in the comments on the script: “I found the brevity of this […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
