By this point in Guilded Age history, I may have started telling Phil, “I want out of the atoms business.” If not, I was close. This might get me in trouble even now, but I always had low-key difficulty with even the concept of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I joked yesterday, but it sure is a weird moment to be looking back not only on this story, but on my whole history with conventions and, to some degree, Phil’s as well. I don’t think we’ve really seen the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Not sure whether or not we should have done a little more with Ashok’s “tactical genius.” He doesn’t really seem to see things through the eyes of a tactician anywhere in this chapter. Before his story is through, we’ll realize that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Huh. That “We’re not gonna let POLITICS ruin this weekend” bit plays even better now to my ear. Somewhere around reading this page, I made a suggestion to Phil that he used much later in the story. You might be […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
John Waltrip often saved Phil or me from ourselves when the script didn’t quite make emotional sense. Example: panel 3 script here originally read, “The two of them glance at each other in a way that, flavored by just having […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
