According to Phil, no one really calls it “the syph” any more; let me know if you have an opinion on that one. Naturally, Scipio has a skull like a fireplug: this isn’t the first time in his life he’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
One writing tip that I don’t consciously follow as often as I should is to make your comic relief a counterpoint to the main story, a kind of compare-and-contrast exercise. While Rachel is busy rediscovering her purpose, Frigg is wallowing […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
If faith is strength, then Tamara could feel hers ebbing even before this fight with Rachel began. She felt it as she hesitated before killing an unarmed opponent who’d committed no obvious sin. After the way their last two battles […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Some moments in fairly quick succession that I hope speak for themselves. If E-Merl had both hands working and could huck full-sized fireballs, he might be a match for Hestia, but still not Hestia and Tamara both. One story note […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
By the bye, the colors in this chapter are choice: not so monochrome that the individual characters don’t pop, but the blood-red theme does a lot to give this story its consistent, urgent atmosphere. That was mostly Jason, I think. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
