At some point after the outline phase and before we started actually drafting pages, we wrote down some extra ideas that occurred to us. It was around that point that Phil realized the political awkwardness of these guys meeting one […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Compensating for the fact that swinging a pipe once isn’t that impressive, Erica added some more savagery into the first couple of panels here. I like the moment of vulnerability as Scarlett lies more or less helpless. As you may […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Minor changes: panel 1 had Bandit be the one to remark upon the nuns’ approach with “Aw, sparksprockets.” I like both expletives, though “sprocketsparks” would’ve been better, probably. The alt text here used to be SFX, and, like many pages […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In addition to being a challenge for her rescuers, Frigg’s restraint was meant to be Christlike but not too obviously Christlike. Phil was delighted with the nickname “Stickface,” which was a nice victory for me after a lot of Frigg […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here’s another example of Erica’s rebreaking of the flow of action. The captions here are unaltered from the script, but here are the panel descriptions. 1. The nuns are getting to their feet and looking at the shattered window. Their […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
