I’m fond of “architectural” layouts like this one, which was Erica’s innovation. Extending the pause after the girls discovered Frigg not there was her idea. We weren’t trying to send any messages by continuing to separate the group into gender-based […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I like this version of Bandit vs. Syr’Nj better, as it plays on some meatier character aspects. This is Bandit’s first one-on-one interaction with another Peacemaker as an ally, and Phil took it as an opportunity to hint at Guilded […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here’s my outline for this four-page sequence, as originally drafted: Big infiltration sequence where Bandit steals the show, until they find someone who can tell them where Frigg’s being held. They are informed that the Ritual of Blood Bond is […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
OMG thought balloons. I can’t believe Phil let these in here. We have something of a difference of taste on the subject. (I think he wrote this scene, but I may’ve revised these balloons in on the basis that the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This scene’s art had to be tweaked, as it showed Byron wearing his ax-shoulder armor about fifteen or sixteen pages before he would acquire it. This is the last chapter where we’ll try to make Syr’Nj’s hat a thing, and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
