Phil seriously reworked the ending from my original, adding a page to it (making this our largest chapter so far at 27 pages). He also left this note in the comments on the script: “I found the brevity of this […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Lovely use of angles in panel 2 and more subtly in panel 3. As I said earlier, Kon’Kr needed this moment after he submitted so easily in the last chapter and yet was established as someone brave enough to attack […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Byron gives “meeting the family” his best shot in panel 1. I, uh, wouldn’t normally recommend trying to resolve your sister-in-law’s conflicts with your wife/fiancee immediately upon meeting them, but Fr’Nj is friendly enough to take his words at face […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
My notes for Kon’Kr called him “Aneihilla’Tr,” then, even more ridiculously, “Un’eye’hilait’R.” An ambitious social climber in a society that usually accords respect based on age, he is also devoted to war upon the humans. He is one of the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
