The artful pan out did create a little more ambiguity than I was entirely comfortable with. Byron and Syr’Nj will be kissing some more, but sex will not be happening until Syr’Nj can get a little further along in Byron’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Syr’Nj would attempt this cure whether she and Byron were involved or not, but she’s carefully doing things in order here. Both as a commander and as a not-quite-yet lover, she needs to know if Byron can take being benched […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
A little more silent gloom for Byron before we get to the meat of this scene. I loved the reader commentary to the effect that Byron could just give everyone the finger and go off to do his own thing. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I tweaked the alt text, but I do like “Everyone Hates Byron”: it really puts a bow on Byron’s situation in this chapter. Of course, Syr’Nj isn’t being as hard on him as it looks, most of the newbies and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I don’t have much to say about this transitional page, except I like how the silence in this page and the last have been used to put us right inside Byron’s mood. Phil has done some role-playing as a few […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
