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Phil did pump up the action FX on this page and punched up the dialogue a bit, but in any drafted version, this is where Rachel really clicked for me. Oh, I was having fun with her before, but I […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil did pump up the action FX on this page and punched up the dialogue a bit, but in any drafted version, this is where Rachel really clicked for me. Oh, I was having fun with her before, but I […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think what’s most important here is what we didn’t do on this page. Both Phil and I enjoyed the concept of E-Merl as the screwup of the bunch, and it would’ve made sense, maybe, for this team of relative […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Frigg: “Is this… one of them those UNPUNCHABLE problems? I’ve heard about that shit in myths, but I never thought…” Kidding aside, I respect the hell out of what Phil brought to this. Since we weren’t going to have Byron […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Well, THIS took a turn. One would certainly have expected Frigg to reiterate her old, fairly justified complaints that Byron is endangering the lives of the people he calls friends just by hanging around them while he’s a time bomb. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I appreciate that Phil pushed as hard as he did for the range of reactions to Byron’s berserking, with the two people he killed having a much harder time getting past it than the others. This aggression therapy, on this […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…