In an earlier version, the toll that saving the group took on Fr’Nj was going to be more personal; it was going to age her a bit… not to make her as old-looking as Faereksch’Nj, but maybe closer in age […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil revised this from a totally different (short) narrative and left the note, “I don’t usually favor direct repetition of any of our incantations… but ‘Graiya’s Prayer,’ as it were, is the only one that I think would benefit from […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When I sat down to write this scene, I meant to find some chemistry between Fr’Nj and Byron, but I somehow ended up with her doing a soliloquy while Byron’s barely able to perform first aid. In fact, one of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The best lines in here (the last two) are Phil’s, and he tweaked several others, but I’m still a proud papa about this scene. I really wanted to play with Frigg and Scipio’s weird dynamic and the ways that it […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The bit about most of the Savasi charging off was added after Phil cross-examined the original concept. If too many of them stayed behind, then Bandit would not be able to seriously affect her friends’ fates; if these were the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
