This page is an attempt to concentrate Phil’s original concept for the battle down to a single page, while also serving as a transition from the previous page to the trap we saw sprung at the start of the story. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
As I think I mentioned before, we had a story in mind that would show a more elaborate treatment of Gravedust’s “choice” than what we could ultimately fit into the text. But I think what we fit works fairly well. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So I don’t know if it was clear or if I ever said it before, but “The Battle of the Burning Heels” is so called because that was the battle where the dwarves were forced to retreat into the desert, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here’s a note I made to Phil in the revision process that I think stands up on its own: This strikes me as Byron’s REAL problem with trying to keep close to his adventuring roots. He has people relying on […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I like that the dialogue brings in links to prior scenes, with the mention of Bert followed by Byron reapplying the argument he made to E-Merl two pages earlier. (By the bye, the whole “You’re drinking FOR me” concept comes […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
