John executed on this brilliantly, but there is a lot of instruction in the script for this page. Here’s most of it: In the “foreground,” the forward progress we have maintained since page 5 is finally halted, as Gravedust floats […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“And now his curse is my curse” is…an interesting line, in light of the secrecy about Byron’s condition. Did Braggadocio know? Seems like he might’ve. They were close, once, before Byron ever met the Peacemakers. The “warning” Bragga mentions, though, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This is kind of an obvious observation, but I do appreciate the cruel irony of Braggadocio’s trauma ruining the one thing he loved above all others. It makes his anguish hit home a lot harder, and keeps his story from […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
It took us three full drafts to get this concluding confrontation to its final point… and even then, John’s interpretation adjusted it a little more. I don’t remember for sure what drafts were whose, although I feel like most of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Pyre has, it seems, retained his fire-casting abilities but lost the self-preservation instinct that would prevent him from burning his own body. If he wasn’t dead when he was turned berserk, he is now. Tobias Gnipgnop’s survival in panel 2 […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
