So here are a few of my notes to Phil: “Auraugu is a crack commando who’s been behind enemy lines (and is the only one to come BACK from that mission), so should Penk be rolling his eyes at him as if he’s an equal? Or is troll pride sufficient to make him see any gnoll as not his better? I already made some revisions to make Penk seem less ungrateful for the INCREDIBLE FAVOR Auraugu has done him, but I’m not sure it’s enough yet.

“What’s their history together? Why did Auraugu take a particular interest in Penk when there are indeed hundreds if not thousands of other troll grunts in the field? Does Penk have some particular ability besides ‘spirit’ that makes him an ideal herald, or is this just Auraugu returning a favor to the guy who was nice enough to fix his mask when another troll accidentally stepped on it?”

Looking back, I don’t think I should have been worried. Auraugu’s ability to move between social strata speaks well of his character, as does the fact that Penk is so used to him that he doesn’t have the same awed regard he has for his own people’s war hero.