Love that first frame of John’s! Talk about a visual transition that ramps up the stakes! Credit goes to Phil for the specific design of this trap and the way it’s put together: I was a lot less particular in […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I touched on this in an earlier annotation or two, but one of my big preoccupations in comics scriptwriting is fight dialogue. It used to be (and frankly, sometimes still is) a struggle for me to get the right words […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
With this chapter, Phil and I changed up our method a bit: this one and Chapter 23 were planned to be entirely drafted by me with Phil’s restrained edits, and for Chapters 22 and 24, it was vice versa. It […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
If Phil had had his druthers, the commando squad that showed up in Chapter 13 probably would’ve become the “anti-Champions,” maybe plus Penk and/or someone else. But Gralor was not a sustainable menace, Yalaria’s capture turned out to be important […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Harky does something that most politicians today are too cowardly to do: he owns the defeat. No sugarcoating, no “temporary setback,” no “minor skirmish.” We. Lost. The. Battle. That doesn’t mean he doesn’t have a plan to turn this around […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
