Bit of a jolt in tone here as we move into Phil’s section. He wrote this part first, before I’d gotten anywhere with my pages. However, the aid-with-strings-attached seen here is a useful contrast with the charity of the last […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The ridiculously oversized illustration Ardaic uses here is easy to poke fun at, but it is an interesting product of Gastonian society, so flush that it can use half a tree’s worth of paper on one drawing if the attention […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We divvied this chapter up into eight sections of three pages, not our usual six sections of four pages, to widen the focus a bit (except for the Bandit-Syr’Nj section, which we agreed needed four pages even though that nudged […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Had it been up to me, the Heads of Houses would not have grown very far beyond the pampered aristocrats we saw in Chapter 3: I felt like too much of them might slow the story down. Phil saw it […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
