Shutting the eyes in panel 4 was John’s call: the script had them continuing to stare widely. A good call, I think… it’s more dynamic, and a better way to transition to the shattered-glass rendition of the War that Felled […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The gist of the original last line was something like “Aw man, you turned him into a monster!”, building on “you taught him condescension.” Flo vetoed this as too obvious and forced, and she was probably right. I also pondered […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Oh, hey, everything’s fine! I vaguely remember things looked pretty dark two-and-a-half chapters back, but I also vaguely remember some bit where Bayen and Brayen returned. Looks like they and Byron have made up for lost time together, and it’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I imagine that most of us who like cartoon entertainment (which I figure is most people who’ll read this) have some traumatic viewing experience that still gives them a chill to remember. Some will mention the shooting death of Bambi’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I’m going to take it as a character beat that Byron, angry as he is, does not simply chop Brother Tom and Brother Homon’s skulls in that first panel, or at least try to. He’s seen through the trick, he […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
