I touched on this in an earlier annotation or two, but one of my big preoccupations in comics scriptwriting is fight dialogue. It used to be (and frankly, sometimes still is) a struggle for me to get the right words […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Love that expression on Bandit in the penultimate panel there. It perfectly captures the shock of hope running through her. Today is a good, good day. I’m writing this on Christmas Eve, so forgive a few thoughts about the nature […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Holy hell, what John did with this. Script sample: Here our trip into Seuss-style art begins. Regarding “Seuss-style:” I’d suggest going to the original book’s illustrations for inspiration on this one, including its simple two-color palette (it’s black and white […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Even after we settled on “the team celebrates Axemas in continuity” as our basic plot, there was still a lot of back and forth, most of which I concede was necessary now. My on-the-job stress was making some of my […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
After some trial and error, I hit on the notion of “everyone gives their gift to the next person down alphabetically” as a nice way for us to include everyone without wasting a lot of verbiage on who was whose […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
