Another Shanna parallel, this one more likely to have been subconsciously or consciously intentional, though we decided on Kur’Ik as a character before we thought about bringing Shanna in. Kur’Ik is not entirely unlike Shanna in build and hairstyle, and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
See? You gotta give those ambiguous end-of-page statements time to get fleshed out. “He never let you see it” = “WE never let you see it.” Again, Faer clearly kept her peace about a lot of things while a wife […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We might’ve taken this part a little too fast: the thrust of the first couple of panels is that Syr’Nj was more or less holding it together until Kon’Kr sailed in and started cheerfully discussing kill counts and then, well, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Syr’Nj is still thousand-yard-staring in panel 1, but perks up briefly in 2 when her mother expresses her confidence in her. The full implications of this moment will hit her a bit later. Worth asking: how does Faereksch’Nj know about […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think I took point on dialoguing some of this page; notes are spotty, but Syr’Nj’s attempt to articulate the real concern of the moment, and Byron immediately understanding what she means despite her stammering, feels like something I’d do. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
