Annotated 38-28
Those expressions continue to impress. No matter what you think of Ardaic, it’s hard not to feel a little bad for him in panel 3.
There were two other drafts of this sequence I should mention. In one of them, it was Ardaic making Syr’Nj the offer to join the Altruists, on the others’ behalf. He comes to Peacemaker headquarters (his own property) and informs Syr’Nj of their actions and their invitation. When Syr’Nj refuses, a panicked Ardaic sends word to Iwatani of her acceptance, putting his own station and even his life at risk for hers, without making the play for her feelings seen here. This would’ve made him more of a wild card, but considering the turn that real-life politics was starting to take around this time, I’m glad we instead made him a man trapped by loyalty until the climax.
In the other, Syr’Nj was offered considerably more carrot and less stick than she is here. Bedard agrees to publish one of her essays unedited in defense of adventurers. Jarvis offers her the prospect of directing Gastonia’s scientific advancements, curing disease and developing technologies. And all of them agree to make it law that there shall never be fewer than six Heads of House in any hall. This sounds tempting to Kur’Ik, but Syr’Nj well knows that such promises mean little. Those who would betray their own will clearly say anything to get what they want. Still, she must play along for now, for both her peoples’ sake: wood elves and Peacemakers. Harky’s armies still want them all dead, after all. In this version, it is Miyamoto’s assassination attempts, aimed at her and the Peacemakers, that will push Syr’Nj to her final break with Gastonia.
I think we nixed that version because it just didn’t suit the arrogance of the Altruists. No one except maybe Iwatani is willing to do much bowing and scraping in their own Hall. But I do like how the carroty version relies more on expressive silence from Syr’Nj, as here:
3. Ardaic does his best to comfort Syr’Nj. He truly believes what he’s saying.
ARDAIC
It was not so long ago that the Hall of Houses expanded to add you, Caneghem, and Reynolds.
ARDAIC
I view such expansions and contractions as a sign of our flexibility, our health.
ARDAIC
Like the inhalations and exhalations of a noble beast.
4. Syr’Nj looks back at him silently, sadly. To say she doesn’t share his optimism about the future of this body is a profound understatement. But at this point, if she doesn’t fall in line now, she’s putting her own kingdom and the Peacemakers at risk.
SYR’NJ CAPTION
Oh, Ardaic.
Seeing Church Lady made me smile.
It does seem like for the briefest of seconds she considers something, if only in a startled “Is he about to kiss me?” way, and then her expression afterwards is one of…regret, disappointment, loss? Like there was a relationship there that she cared about, and it has unalterably changed and there is something tragic about that. She doesn’t seem angry, just sad, for a whole horde of reasons. Until the last, where I think the frustration at his willful ignorance is made clear.
I feel bad for Ardiac, but very proud of Syr. She shows continued strength and grace during what is, all things considered, an incredibly intense and arduous time. I think she also rejects him in the noblest way possible, truly showing care for the well being of his soul. She’d be within her rights to be very angry, her husband is barely cold, but she truly embodies the altruistic ideals the Heads have coopted, and instead gracefully maintains her boundaries, while also trying to help another stop lying to themselves.