The serum still works if (1) Homon hasn’t counteracted it and (2) there’s only one berserker spirit possessing the body at a time. These are important qualifiers. In retrospect, it’s interesting that Rabbit and the other adventurers don’t know as […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I don’t think I appreciated how sound Flo’s storytelling instincts were here. On one level, the reader wants to see Tom confronted and defeated, even if it’s not really Tom here, and this fight is a good warm-up for the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Aha, I forgot that Rabbit did sort of sneak a little crush-confession into panel 2 here. In an earlier draft, Bandit noticed this and tried to gently discourage it: here, she might just excuse it as Rabbit being himself. (“Who […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think we should have spent more of pages 12-13 showing Brother Tom’s emotional transition. It’s a bit of a journey back from “What even is this, how dare something happen that I didn’t predict, who is this squinty-eyed jackass telling me my nihilism is meaningless” […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
IT’S A TRAP(EZOID)!!! Nice detail in panel 2 that what alerts Bandit and Rabbit first is a small stampede from the wildlife. They’ve known something was not right in their woods for ages, but what they’re feeling now is more […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
