I would have definitely said that Phil must have come up with “before the lock,” but apparently I was on top of Frigg’s style of slang for once. Phil did, however, bring up the excellent point that Frigg and Syr’Nj […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The nameless wood elf’s first word balloon here prompted an argument on my use of ellipses that it’s just as well you all missed. Rachel’s offer to heal Scipio prompted more fruitful discussion. Phil and I had thought Rachel’s powers […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I do like Gr’Zl’s style of narration here: young or adult, he’s a guy with a little too much energy to burn, himself. Phil needed some convincing on that point, but I stuck to my guns: we needed something to […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This scene was written well before “Woodreads.” We knew the general shape of Syr’Nj’s own childhood and adolescence, but not the specifics of her interval with Gr’Zl: it just seemed like hiding out from a Gaston-like suitor in the library […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I see this note from Phil on the script: “I’m making a special effort to seek as little change as possible this go-round, both in the interest of fairness from the previous chapter, the expedience at which we must complete […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
