Annotated 6-18
Either this page or the next was an addition by Phil… I’m gonna say this page? This pushed our page count from 24 to 25 for the first time. This may not seem like a big deal, and I didn’t […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Either this page or the next was an addition by Phil… I’m gonna say this page? This pushed our page count from 24 to 25 for the first time. This may not seem like a big deal, and I didn’t […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
At some point after the outline phase and before we started actually drafting pages, we wrote down some extra ideas that occurred to us. It was around that point that Phil realized the political awkwardness of these guys meeting one […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Here’s another example of Erica’s rebreaking of the flow of action. The captions here are unaltered from the script, but here are the panel descriptions. 1. The nuns are getting to their feet and looking at the shattered window. Their […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Sixty years ago, an “injury to the eye” panel like this would’ve probably been redacted. Panel 1 tells you a lot about how Byron made it through the intervening years between losing his shire and gaining lasting friendships. I’m glad […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Is Frigg’s mace actually crappy? Probably not, considering how much she puts it through and the “faith” she’s later shown to put in it. I think it’s more likely it’s just not the kind of thing that fetches much of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…