So my original version of this scene left off with Lia’s “It could get you in serious trouble one day” and picked up after JJ had met the cops in a shootout: this page was all Flo’s addition. I was […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Action stories often have trouble with characters who talk when they should be taking, well, action. “Before I kill you, Mr. Bond, let me tell you my plan.” Sometimes villains talk to their intended prey when they really should be […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
One thing for writers to watch out for: when you’re finally ready to turn the tables on a villain who’s seemed all but unstoppable, don’t flip the script completely unless the story justifies it…and it usually won’t. JJ is falling […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: “You wouldn’t believe how much research went into the discussion of Skype videos on today’s GUILDED AGE. And that’s no joke.” Xan’s character really shines here. At first, he acts like he’s gonna be a robot all through this […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: “The virtual office reduces workplace violence on tonight’s GUILDED AGE.” Sometimes I fantasize about putting together a better data matrix of my own work. If I did, this page would probably rank a special place as the comic with […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
