Having shown Harky cool off two or three allies (Arfa, Gobligno, and Goblaurence) who showed him some level of open antagonism, we now throw a different sort of challenge at him. Iver is not quite on Harky’s level as a […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This page is Phil’s script, but I’m a big fan of it. In an enjoyable exchange, we firm up the most important thing about Goblaurence: he is no mere composer of sick burns. His insights are constructive, if you can […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This page did not go over as clearly as I’d hoped it would. It would’ve been a bit of a desperation device, but maybe we should’ve added a flashback panel that showed Don Gobligno’s intent more plainly. Perhaps he could […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The poor orcs’ time as slaves of the World’s Rebellion didn’t get a lot of attention in the story, for one very good reason: we didn’t want all the World’s Rebellion’s legitimate grievances and sympathetic characters to be overshadowed by […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
My memories and records of who did what in this scene are patchy, but I think this was Phil’s outline notes, my execution, and some Phil dialogue tweaks on top. Nevertheless, of the characters we’ll be meeting here, Goblaurence is […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
