I worked to hold onto this scene, even though almost every other scene in the chapter was taking more space than we’d planned (except for Byron’s scene, which I cut and merged with this one). It wasn’t essential to the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Well. That took a turn. Scipio’s thinking, This is why I don’t make idle conversation; too many landmines. But really, Syr’Nj would’ve gotten down to this even if Scipio had just been standing there silently. Actually, I’m kinda curious about […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“Gaffes for Saphs?” This scene’s mostly an incidental palate cleanser after the almost unrelenting grimness of the Sepia sequences. It’s the most carefree bit of business we’re going to get this chapter, so I almost hesitate to point out that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
At least Seife understands how bad he fucked up, tries to offer Shanna consolation, and understands when she clearly doesn’t want to hear it. Judith had a handful of scenes in Fans, and she was at least a happy kind of crazy, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
From the script: This sequence is something of a bookend to Shanna’s debates with Carol, where she showed how strong she could be. She doesn’t do that here, and if that other sequence was about cutting Carol’s demons out of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
